miércoles, 20 de enero de 2016

John & Dylan

This story is about a man named John that had a refrigerator live named Dylan. One day, the man went to his kitchen because he wanted to drink something. He opened the refrigerator and he took out a drink. He tried to close the refrigerator and the handle fell down in the floor, John and Dylan were surprised. The man got out of his house with a catalogue store. Dylan saw it, he was sad because he thought that his owner wanted to buy a new refrigerator. When John left his house, the refrigerator left the house after. He walk outside without direction sadly thinking about his owner.


When John arrived to his home the refrigerator wasn’t there and he said, “Noooo!” he went quickly to look for him. While the refrigerator was in the way, Dylan saw a shop window with the news refrigerator in sale and he looked at old refrigerator in the trash, Dylan run fast in the street and his picture about he and John fell down.

John arrived to the same place that the picture was and he asked to the news refrigerators, “where is he?” (showing the picture) and they didn’t answer, but the little toaster pointed at the left. John went to the place that Dylan was and he showed him the book that John had. John explained that he was bought a new handle for him and Dylan understood everything. At the end, they went to their home and John put the new handle in Dylan. The refrigerator hugged his owner lustily and they was so happy because everything was like always.

4 comentarios:

  1. "Dylan saw it, he was sad because and..." I didn't understand this, I think there is something missing

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  2. Hellen, Dylan saw the catalogue.

    Hellen, maybe you could write "he saw the magazine", so it is more specific.

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